Here are the boards created for the crit. Their are various designs as it has not been decided which one would be the most effective.
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Strengths
- Wire frame is good, very clear with instructions/measurements.
- Logo on the bottom of each slide shows illustrations.
- Clear, readable type for title pages.
- Great use of illustrations to convey in subject matter.
- Slide show three is the best. Header at the top makes the website consistant.
Areas for improvement
- Place borders around each window.
- The block capitals of the links don't quite go with the aesthetic of the rest of the site.
- Maybe increase the weight of the type. Look at the alignment as well.
- Make the illustrations more colours and a keeping consistently in the colour.
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