- Very clear illustrations, legible.
- Like the paper formatting
- The pencil illustrations are effective
- The illustrations are a different approach to what everyone else has done.
- The use of colour is very strong and helps separate each section.
- The illustrations give context to the different print processes.
- The pencils are a good way to shows the colour mode, gives the topic a fun edge.
Areas for improvement
- The spot colour illustration is unclear.
- Could experiment with the layouts more.
- Watch out for widows.
- Text needs more leading.
- Use a heavier body text, hard to read on ISSU.
- All illustrations should match the pencil illustrations, make sure fill the page, less white space.
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